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2023北京中考时间及安排

根据北京教育考试院公布的时间来看,2023北京中考时间从 6月24日到6月26日,持续三天,具体详情如下图所示:



英语作文一直是很多学生的痛,如何给孩子更好的满分作文示例呢?北京中考英语作文到底怎么写呢?一起来看下文。

2023中考英语作文满分作文示例

一、假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Tom要到中国来,他想了解中国的风俗习惯,请你写一篇短文向他介绍中国的风俗习惯。包括:表达问候,与人就餐,参加聚会等。

注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to China. You said you wanted to learn about the customs in China. Now, let me tell you something about them.China is a country with a long history,____________________

When in Rome, do as the Romans do. And you’ll have a great time in China.

范文:

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to China. You said you wanted to learn about the customs in China. Now, let me tell you something about them.

China is a country with a long history and there are many customs in China. Now let me introduce some to you.

When you meet friends, you should greet each other and just say “hello”, instead of shaking hands frequently. When you eat at a friend’s home, you should use your right hand to hold chopsticks. It is best not to make noise when eating. It’s polite to eat all the food in your bowl. Don’t knock bowls or plates with chopsticks. This is impolite. After dinner, the host usually makes tea for the guests. When you leave, you should say goodbye to the host politely. If your friends invite you to the party, you’d better arrive a little earlier, 5 to 10 minutes in advance. You can bring a small gift to your friends. But your friends won’t open presents immediately. This is different from other foreign countries.

When in Rome, do as the Romans do. If you obey these, I think you’ll have a great time in China.

【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍中国的一些风俗习惯,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来,本文应该用第二人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时,提出建议可以多用情态动词;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。

二、假如你是李华,你发现有些父母在该陪伴孩子的时候,却选择沉迷于手机。请你根据下面的内容提示,写一篇短文,谈谈对这种现象的看法。内容要点如下;

1. 家长花大多时间玩手机以至于不关注孩子;

2. 家长应该为孩子树立榜样,少玩手机;

3. 家长可以有更多空闲时间陪伴孩子:

4. 良好的沟通可以加强亲子关系,有利于孩子的成长;

5. 补充一两点有关信息或想法。

注意:

1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

2. 词数:60-80;

3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;

4. 开头已给出,不计人总词数。

参考词汇:accompany v陪伴strengthen v. 加强do good to有益于

Today, many parents spend a lot of time playing games and seeing movies on their smartphones. ________

范文:

Today, many parents spend a lot of time playing games and seeing movies on their smartphones. They pay less or even no attention to their kids. I think parents should set good examples for their children, so they should shut their phones off or spend less time on them. If so, parents will have more spare time to accompany their children and do lots of things with their children, like playing games, watching movies or playing sports, which can provide good chances to communicate with their children. Good communication can not only help strengthen parent-child relationship but also help children’s development.

All in all, parents should use the smartphones in a good way and care more about their children’s life.

【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求写一篇关于父母沉迷于手机而不关注孩子的英文短文,要求包含给出的要点并补充一两点有关信息或想法。

2.写作指导:写作时,时态应用一般现在时,人称综合采用第三人称和第一人称。文章按照题目所给思路展开即可,最后补充一两点相关信息或作者的想法。文章应做到层次分明、条理清晰、不要出现单词拼写及语法时态方面的错误。

三、人的一生要面临各种各样的选择,选择的方向正确,努力才有意义。所以,我们在面临选择时,要客观理性地分析。请以“A choice that I made”为题,并根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。

1.要点:(1)你做出了什么选择;

(2)你是怎样做出选择的;

(3)它给你带来怎样的影响和变化;

2.要求:

(1)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名

(2)词数100左右

范文:

A choice I made

There is no doubt that it is important for us to make reasonable choices in life.

Last year. I fell in love with volleyball. Then I chose to be a member of the school volleyball club. However, my parents wanted me to spend more time on schoolwork. I had a long talk with them calmly. After that, I trained hard in the club. Meanwhile, I reviewed my schoolwork as long as I finished training. To my joy, I got satisfying results not only in the matches but also in the tests.

All in all, no matter what the choice is, if it is reasonable, just make it to follow your heart. Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.

【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作;要求我们从“我做出的选择”这个主题出发,并联系实际,发表自己的观点。

2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般过去时为主;结合实际,根据表达需要适当发挥,使文章内容更加充实、完整,但需要注意合理性,要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨;应从句子的整体结构出发,以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使行文连贯、自然。

四、良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部分。请你根据以下内容要点提示,以“Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic”为题,写一篇短文,可以适当发挥。

1)每天早晨6: 30按时起床,运动半小时,晚饭后运动一小时左右;

2)骑自行车或步行上下学;

3)主动上体育课,积极参加课外活动;

4)身体强健,精力充沛,保持运动习惯。

要求:开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;内容合理,要点齐全,句子及篇章结构正确连贯,书写规范;不得出现姓名校名等个人信息。

Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic

Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. As teenagers, we should play sports often.______________________________

范文:

Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic

Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. As teenagers, we should play sports often.

In the morning, I usually get up at 6:30 on time, and do morning exercises for half an hour. After breakfast, I ride or walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise. In the school, I take an active part in PE. Sometimes we play football or volleyball, and sometimes we play basketball, table tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport. I also take part in some after-class activities. I have never been absent from them. In the evening after supper, I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour either with my parents or with my friends.

I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic. So I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting. I will keep the good habit all my life.

【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。第二段应包含内容要点提示中的前3点,都是关于“我”平时具体的运动习惯;第三段综述运动的优点,并得出结论我们应该保持运动习惯,呼应文章主题。

2.写作指导:根据文章的标题可知,本文应该用第一人称来写作;根据内容要点提示可知,时态采用一般现在时为主。

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